Feedback on my 2nd power ability

This is my second time creating a ability on roblox studio. Any feedback will be greatly appreciated :smile:
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This is great, but I think there are a few things that could be improved upon here.

Excluding the obvious lack of sound, I think the character animation for it is lacking. The animation of having the beam be released looks very unnatural and abrupt. Also, why is it coming out of the torso when it’s being charged in the hand? That doesn’t really make much sense.

I do like the effects that the beam has, the camera shaking along with the yellow tint makes it feel like it has some power behind it, especially with how it forms a crater in the ground. Good stuff overall.

You should add a absorption animation and then more shaking before the launch, otherwise it’s good.