Hello guys you might remember yesterday i posted a topic about my first low poly shop Feedback on my low poly shop! and i got a lot of constructive feedback and so i went back into studio and redid the whole thing here are some pictures of the before and afters. I also used this same building for my sell one but just changed the colours and the text of course
It looks quite good, however the shape of it is kinda square looking, you could probably add more variety of shapes however this isn’t a big issue if it fits the style of your game i’ll keep it. I feel like you should change or remove the blue color on the door as it doesn’t look good and it seems to be another large window, maybe give it a more better color so it doesn’t blend in with the build don’t place a lot of windows around your build as it’ll look basic and plain, it could use a more proper roof I’ll try changing the color to a more grey-ish color the blue isn’t looking good IMO.
There could be more items on it such as vents, signs, consider using another color for the text, try not to make everything one color change it up a bit use other vibrant colors, the door has no detail whatsoever – as in, it lacks a window and a handle.
That being said I think it overall looks pretty good!
Nice builds, Although I feel like you should add more decoration to show what shop contains. Example like a cookie shop could have a logo of a cookie somewhere or a hat store could have a window with hats. It makes the shop have some personality and make it look very stylish overall.
I really prefer the second one because the colours were much more vibrant and it looked more welcoming(at least for me), you even added a blue ring in front of the shop like a simulator game. If you are planning on making a simulator game and using this, I would say maybe add a floating text that says shop(like in mining simulator). That’s all. Great work on the build!
I saw your first version of the Shop, It’s better than Before I’d say(at least in my opinion), Down Below I’d like to post a picture of a small problem that I may only just not see in the picture, who knows?
I feel like that that part is Straight, as I would imagine it to be more bent or turned a little bit.
Otherwise, Good Job still! I get the idea of the kind of shop you want to make and the goal you want to achieve, Every now and then we’d all need a little bit of advice though in life.
Both builds are really nice, and could use some improving. Make sure to use NPC’s as a reference when building, to make sure the building isn’t both too large or too small. You could definitely add some nice little detail to the windows, to give it a kind of shiny look.
Other than that, you’re on the right path! Maybe you should pickup a few blender skills, and you’ll be golden.
I really like it! All in all the colors and contrast is pretty good. I do suggest giving it more shape though, maybe add some curvature to give it a more friendly look.
