It took me too long to make this. Give feedback pretty please.
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looks like my mansion, if you divided the size by around a thousand. im so rich!
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Such fine lines, your artistic talent is truly spectacular!
Or so thy thought.
From further examination I have come to my senses, and have thus noticed all the wobbly lines!
Not to mention the safety hazards.
This art piece is a disgrace against humanity, thus, this piece must be destroyed before dawn. Failure to do so will result in termination! Heed thy warning.
Ahem, ignoring that, its pretty good :D
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Looks pretty good! I would recommend adding some more texture to the flooring, and where is the railing for that upper level?? Someone could get hurt!
Good job on evening the spaces between bars on the stair railing.
Is it nighttime in this scene?
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It is not nighttime.
I am in your walls.
Ah ok. I saw the dark windows and wasn’t sure.
The rats tell me otherwise.
That and I doubt an unc can sneak around in there :D
More feedback, the glass doesnt look like glass.
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Stair and roof supports. Supports above the wall above the stairs. Lights everywhere. Hanging lights. Ceiling lights. Guard rail at top floor. Wall trim. Wall facade pillars.
Guard rails are for the weak! Just don’t fall!
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Because basic security and safety is underrated
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I assume you have requirements for a homework assignment you have to adhere to. Note that I hate 2d art and suck at it.
- P = perspective issue
- Blue dots = where do the stairs connect, like what wall, it’s bit confusing w/ perspective
- Wall? = unsure what that area is
- Pillar Boxes = the pillar is nice, but I can’t tell how it connects to the walls around it. that door at the top left is inset w/ a wall to it’s right, but cuts off that would make me think there’s a wall directly behind the pillar, but the bottom of the pillar suggests otherwise.
- Ruler? = some lines appear more sketch-like and less straight than others.
Mainly perspective issues. In an architecture summer camp, I did orthographic drawings mostly. It helped to first draw important points and horizon/main focus lines, then a general shape like a box, and go from there. It’s been years though.
Also, to throw it out there, I used to watch this channel on YouTube that has a bunch of Architecture videos. Here’s a playlist for graphics in architecture: https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLuJj3iQpiK3v36Bgsam66UjiBqv_U0_iL. It’s more floorplans than anything, but it’s a nice resource.
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Yes, its a homework assignment.
I just wanted to mention that the stair and “P” perspective pictures are in fact accurate. It follows the picture perfectly.
I know that the perspective isn’t perfect, and I didn’t bother to follow it perfectly. As far as I know, my professor likely isn’t looking for technical perfection.
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Oh my god. CRAZED BRICK LEG REVEAL!!!
Anyways the drawing itself sucks. What is it even supposed to be? Fricking non-euclidean space?
Architecture
Also give feedback please
Those are separate levels.
I’m sorry, mate., I didn’t mean to ignore your feedback or anything like that. I appreciate you taking the time to model and render your ideas.
I wanted to mention that the building is sound structurally. I based the drawing on real life and followed all structural aspects perfectly. The perspective may have things looking odd, but everything is there.
Here are some more angles.
Added the rail that I forgot about:
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I love these 2 drawings. What is the building called?
For my own privacy, I’m not going to share, but know that the building sucks functionally. 
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dang it :[ /j
I like the other drawings, pretty good stuff, Im very pleased that you installed proper safety measures into the drawing :D
I think the only thing that made it look a little odd was the perspective, but the new images you’ve shown actually look much better so nice work!
I think we already got a foot reveal, which was really scary 
But dont quote me on that, that could’ve been someone elses foot idk lol.
that sounds weird dont quote that,