FEEDBACK on my ARMY GFX? (V4)

Hey Devforum, been a while since I posted but I recently Finished the Army GFX V4 version. The other three are posted on my devforum so if you want to look at it you can. Anyways, feedback on this one?

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Howdy K26319/LAW_K2K2,

Looking pretty sharp! I like the lighting and shadows on the character. I would suggest some revised shadowing for the sandbags on the right side of the image though, they do appear slightly brighter than the remainder of the image. Editing a bit to match the lighting of the character would definitely help set the scene. This goes for the grass as well. I feel like the character has a slightly darkening light on it, the grass seems very bright.

Best of luck, you’re doing great!

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It have no important flaws, but it stays quite generic.
Realistic though!
Just keep in mind this won’t be descriptive enough for advertisements or thumbnails

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Thanks for the feedback, I just noticed that the sandbag does seem brighter, and the character is a bit darker. I’ll try to work on the lighting next time.

How should I make it more descriptive?

Think of a story and try to tell it.

Honestly, there’s not much wrong with this. Just a few.
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This weird yellow tint ontop

And in my opinion; the magazine should be colored differently
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similiar to this.

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