FEEDBACK on my ARMY GFX

I Just finished an Army icon. I don’t like this one though looking for feedback

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You should probably scale the gun a little bigger, it looks like a toy.

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The background looks too simplistic for the clothing and the accessories. Besides that, Thats a really good quality render and you did a pretty good job!

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The starburst background seems a bit out of place. Also #help-and-feedback:cool-creations

why that background? also the ar15 or whatever just looks bad and proportions a bit small. The mag pouches just looks weird since it wouldn’t fit that kind of mag. I would try making the clothing folds a bit more different from one another. I think it would look nice if the safety glasses had a metallic surface to it and slightly transparent. I would try to make the render more interesting by adding more colors instead of just having a green theme (it’s good to stick to a theme but you should still have some colors stand out)

oh ya also for such a close up render I would add some shaders to the character/accessories but it’s up to you if you’ve got the courage or time to do it

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