Feedback on my Army obstacle course GFX

Hey Devfourm, I just finished up this obstacle course GFX and I’m looking for any feedback
ArmyObbyGFX

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looks nice, it might be a little too glossy

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I like it. The lighting looks a bit off and the drill sergeant’s face is hard to see. I’d also recommend changing up the faces a bit on the recruits. I can see that the one doing the monkey bars and the one going off of the platform have the same face. Keep up the good work!

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Characters looks shiny :sparkles:

Try toning it down

The characters look a bit stiff as if they were statue. Try to exaggerate the movements of characters a bit more to get the emotions out of what you’re trying to portray.

As other people have stated, you might want to reduce the gloss of the character.

Otherwise, it’s a good looking render with nice lighting and materials! :smile: