I’ve put more effort into this one than my previous arts and really proud of it so far. Is there anything I should focus on more or should do to improve this?
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It’s a good start. However, the eyes don’t fit with the drawing, and the legs looked like they’re stitched together. Other than that, it’s good!
Hope this help 
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Uh, the faces don’t match and one of their mouths can’t fit their face I suggest making it bigger. I mostly help with GFX’s but I’ve seen this type of art, I don’t think I would rate it 10/10, It would be a solid 6/10
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They sorta look like they have same face syndrome and the first girl is pointing her phone at her bust. The first girl isn’t really looking at the phone, but seems to be breaking the fourth wall.
Looks good other than that though.
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I like it. I like the anime style, and like how good it looks. The fact that Roblox moderators might take it as inappropriate is the downside.
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Wow, it’s incredibly detailed, I’d recommend using a slightly lighter shade of red for the eyes though. The first girl isn’t looking at the phone and it would be better if it was.
However, knowing Roblox moderation, it’s probably inappropriate and you might get a 1 day ban or worse.
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