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Just something I made for my self and wanted to see how people feel about this, I already posted on twitter but I want to see actual feed back from actual devs.
All feedbacks are appreciated even if it’s good or bad, they will help me improve my future arts.

KiiraLegacy
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It honestly looks really great.
I think you should uncloud the vocal point a bit, and that would be my only crit.

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Thanks I wanted to make it foggy but you got a point

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I’m not great at Digital Art but this look great, nice choice of colours and overall 10/10.

Could you tell me what software or online art program you used (If not that’s fine).

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I used Blender to render just the character and photoshop to edit the whole image.

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I thought it was blender and photoshop, thanks :+1:

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Looks nice! However, there are a few things I could suggest to be changed. The moon looks too bright and overall a bit out of place. It’s very distracting; I would adjust its luminosity levels with some curves adjustments. The second thing, perhaps some depth in the image would enhance it and take it to the next level. Do this by utilizing field blur or landscape blur. I would also mess around with some overall CC (Color Correction). Although pink and blue tend to be the fueling dual colors for most designs (e.i. green & purple, pink & blue, red & green, etc.), I personally don’t think it fits the aesthetic of the image. What I’m visualizing is a moody midnight aesthetic. Also, I would also mask the particles out of the character as I’m pretty sure they’re intended to be stars.

Additionally, if you want to get really ‘down-to-detail’, I would make a solid color layer with the color of the fog and set it to ‘Linear Dodge (Add)’. Then, create a layer mask, get a soft brush with a low flow set and start adding a bit of glow to the fog.

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Thanks for the advice! Also the particles meant to be sparks and not stars. The “Moon” you said is acually a portal to another place, it does look like a moon.

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Honestly, It looks very good I like it alot
Just GG and keep doing

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