Feedback On My ATM

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#1

Recently i have been working on a game sort of like Jailbreak, but better, bigger, and overall more suited to player desires. I wanted to spread ATM Machines around the map that you can rob for 100 cash. It’s a low amount because it is common to find. Anyways What do you think of my ATM. (I Know it is a free model i am working on a Model for it in blender that will be done soon. The script is not tho.)

How it Works:

First, you walk/drive/ride up to it. Then, you hold the “E” Button to rob it. After that, you must wait 2 minutes before robbing it again.

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#2

I think that the machine model is good. The script also seems to work fine. I’d suggest making it a little bigger though.

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#3

Okay, I will make it bigger after i finish my blender model for it.

#4

I feel like it takes wayyy too long to rob, maybe make it a bit shorter.

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#5

I like the simplistic UI for when you walk up to the ATM test, my feedback would probably be a popup when you robbed the atm, but thats just my thought. Otherwise, it looks perfect for your game!

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#6

I feel it is fine because it is supposed to be around the same time as a Jailbreak robbery which is around 15 seconds for donut and Gas station areas.

#7

Yeah ok then, it is your game not mine so do what you want.

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#8

Like a thing that shows you gained cash? Say like in Jailbreak when you complete a robbery it is like +____ cash pops up.

#9

Yeah sort of like that, I think it would be unique to have just to add another detail for the ATM robbery!

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#10

well i am adding other stores you can rob also, so this i really think is good for the ATM. It’s sorta just there as an extra feature.

#11

Oh ok, well regardless it looks fine, you did a good job.

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#12

I really like it! I think the color of it can be changed, dark green just doesn’t look best in my opinion. You should also add a cooldown for it (if you didn’t already), and while it’s on cooldown, make the screen red, so players know that they can’t rob it yet. That’d be a nice touch.

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#13

Okay, I will change the color to something nicer and try to add the screen change.

#14

I would also probably put a SurfaceGui in the screen with a Textlabel to show how much you get from robbing it

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#15

Hey it looks nice for now but here are some features that could make it better:

  • Cooldown (so you don’t spam rob it)
  • After Robbing Effect (maybe including a sound effect, gui, animation, etc.)
  • Particles (so it looks better, maybe some money particle while its being robbed)
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#16

It has a two minute cooldown, i will work on adding all that other stuff also.

#17

Hey, it looks pretty good! So how long have you been scripting for?

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#18

not very long actually, only a year.

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#19

Oh, nice though! I’ve been doing scripting for 2 months now, and so far have only really made a countdown lights system that works with a gui, as well as a basic racing system (that I’m still developing further) that displays a player’s race time at the end of the race. Basic, but I’m proud of it so far haha.

Maybe some time you could check out some of my newer scripts and see what you think I could do better (not bug fixing or something like that). But either way, nice work!

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#20

Okay, You can private chat me anytime! Btw the script was actually a kit, but it was broken over the years so i had to fix it. Requires around the same amount of skill tho!