Hi.
So I recently made an attic build to just test my skills with details and such, and I just feel like Im not quite done with it yet, but I cant think of anything else to add, so of course, I’m asking total strangers to give me feedback on it (the magic of the internet, I guess lol).
Here are some screenshots:
And heres the link to the game so you can look at it further: Attic Build - Roblox
You can rate this out of 10 if you want, it wouldn’t help me in any way, but it would be cool to see an overall rating of how much you like it
Thank you for taking your time to read this,
-WalkingTalkingTopHat
There is some ZIndex clashing going on (multiple faces are in the exact same spot and flicker) with the boxes and the tape on them. I only noticed the problem with the boxes only, but keep an eye out for more!
The bars above look too symmetrical and too perfect. Consider making some of them cracked, broken, or tilted to add variation.
The bed looks as if I’ll cut someone! The hard edges just do not CUT IT (). Jokes aside, try having the bed be a mesh and avoid the edges from being too straight.
Apart from that, you did a very good job! As for the rating, you can set up a poll from 1 to 10 and it will show the average rating given from everyone. But I’d rate you
The first thing I wanted to say is that your lighting needs some work. There are walls (like in the first screenshot) by which the shading looks more like a couple layers of gradient than like a flat surface. I’d suggest you change the ambient settings in Lighting and make the PointLight and SpotLight objects have a more subtle toning to it.
I believe that your builds looks good! I wouldn’t go for the same materiel for a whole room though. (Unless that’s the style your doing) Looks to be a pretty simple build. Just curious as to why there is a yellow type of lighting but there are no lights visible? I also would suggest doing something to the walls, Ex: Painting, Poster, Lights, a creepy window. Just a suggestion, not trying to be rude in any way. Thanks for reading!
This is a pretty good start but there is a few things you can add. This includes detailing (the walls, floors, bed, objects), fill up the space with other stuff, perhaps add cobwebs if you want that kind of attic aesthetic.
). Jokes aside, try having the bed be a mesh and avoid the edges from being too straight.
