Feedback on My Best GFX

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#1

Intro

Hello! I am a GFX designer and want to show off my best GFX. I spent a lot of time working on this and want feedback. I want constructive criticism on how I can improve my technique.

Software

  • Roblox Studio
  • Blender (2.8)
  • Photoshop

The GFX

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(I made the Skydiving Simulator game up, it was just for practice)

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What Should I Remake Next?

  • Dominus Simulator
  • Prison Simulator
  • Weight Lifting Simulator

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#2

Hey there so I like to start out by saying nice work so far. But I think you should add some more effects more then blur and also add some sun rays and change the direction of sun shown below. Edit: Iā€™d also like to add maybe you should look down at them sort of so you can see the ground or at least some surroundings instead of a pretty much complete frame of sky. (Ik there are mountains)

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#3

This is a fantastic GFX.
There are several things that are visually pleasing about this, such as the colours, the detail and I love the fade effect coming off the characters, giving it a realistic skydiving feel. I like all the small details, such as the mountain in the back, which shows the height of the skydiving and makes it seem more fun for the player.

I like the use of the cartoony red and black font used for the game title. (Could you tell me what font you used for that?)

Excellent job! :slightly_smiling_face:

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#4

I will send you a link to the website where I got it when I am back in my computer.