Here is my build that i made:
I want some feedback i improve it
Here is fixed the neon thing:
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The yellow is a bit too bright/neon. Other than that, it seems fine.
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Absolutely outstanding! It looks great! Honestly, I love the way everything fits in and the colours are beautiful! I’d agree with cwd it’s a-bit too bright, but absolutely astonishing work! Love it!
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It took me few mins to an half an hours to build it.
I just started building so i am proud of what i just did.
Yes, i agree whit you guys, its too neon. I will fiy that right now!
Thanks for the feedback!
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I Really like it but just the yellow is really bright so if you fix that it would work great!
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The overall design is amazing, it looks very polished as it is not too crammed with a bunch of parts and the color scheme is very nice. I like how you used different parts it allows the shop to have more of a lively feel to it and not just some blocky approach. I feel like maybe adding some nature like rocks/bushes and flowers around the building too!
IMO, I feel like you could use a different color on the texts maybe try going for a whiter color or possibly change the neon material to something else that looks nice to you.
It’s overall a great build, good job.
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This is incredible, and works the lowered-poly building style very well! Perhaps lower the the neon signage a tad and extend the red brick on the top left and right by a couple studs? Apart from that amazing. Keep up the good builds, hope to see more! 
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Looks great, except for the signs which seem a little too bright. Keep up the good work.
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Great shop! I loved the design on the sign but the yellow seems a bit bright, so I would change that but other than that it’s really good.
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Using 3D texts is a very good way to design any build, but be careful in making them too bright. The shop looks great but you could add a certain patterns to the bricks so it looks more realistic.
Here is an example from one of my maps.
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I love it, I think the sign would look more beautiful if it was white and not yellow, other than that it looks nice!
Keep up the good work!
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First of all, your shop looks very-well made! I also appreciate on how you made the building’s appearance to looks like bricks!
Though I would like to recommend you place like a LED light that says ‘open’ in one of the windows and add some ad posters on the store’s windows to make the store look more lively and would most likely fit it’s appearance as a store.
Your development overall looks good and could be even recommendable to be placed in a city game.
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This looks amazing, Except maybe make like the yellow sign LESS brighter then right now but it still looks amazing I love the creative work you did here I give it 9/10 AMAZING.
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I’m not a fan of the neon windows, but the logo is on point. The overall design of the shop is really good. It fits well with your map.
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