Feedback on my build

Howdy! I’ve been building a game for my group. I need feedback on the design of this building from the view of the back. If you have any advice, please feel free to comment them.

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I don’t like it. There can be much improvement. I just don’t like the shape of the building. I feel like its very…old looking. I feel like its made from 2012. I don’t really have any thing to help you improve. I know this may hurt but “Truth may hurt, but lies hurt even more.”

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No worries. I was hoping for this type of criticism. Thank you.

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From what I can see in the image, it looks like some sort of military build or something along those lines. Can we get more shots of areas other than just the back of the build which doesn’t give it much content to give feedback on?

The build would look - much more better or interesting by a less square shape.

Try throwing another shape on the side or at least include your little own details as it seems in early development to make a post and ask for feedback on something that’s unfinished objects surrounding the build or a roof at least so it doesn’t feature a bland build find the perfect color scheme that’ll intense the design.

Not much to offer feedback on here other than to make it more detailed and place your details so it could look more interesting. Could you perhaps include what the build is or what game your creating that features this style.

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It’s supposed to be a hangar for tanks. Here are screenshots of the other areas.![Screen Shot 2020-07-19 at 10.29.57 PM|690x387](upload://ng

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I can see that you’re doing some military type of camp hangar. My best suggestion is to use reference images, and also adding texture type of details, such as metal could help make it stand out more! Cause, it does look a bit basic.

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Thanks for providing more images of the build.

If this is a sort of shelter for keeping tanks in I normally see the outside appearance have a more steel material around the entire build with items outside showing it’s a hangar, especially in the images provided, look quite small.

You could definitely add more height to the build and place different props to make it stand out you could even use reference images as inspiration to get those important details on the build.

There are countless ways to improve your build and make it more interesting or detailed. Choose different approaches that’ll make it stand out.

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Thank you for all the advice. I appreciate this.

I think adding more detail can make it better, adding trees or plants to the house.

But good job!

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It’s a great start, but I recommend you change the texture of the stone walls, and add lighting.

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I don’t actually like it I think you should add like path and road and the game will look better

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I was gonna add trees it was that I needed the most important things done first.