Feedback on my build

Hello!

So, I built a home store for my friend and I would love feedback on it.
Feel free to check it out, I will put some pictures below and you can see if you like it or not!
(I forgot to add this is my first build in a long time so that’s why it’s not great.)

I was also wondering, how long should I wait until I start commissions.
Thank you for reading, and have a good day.

Pictures



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I suggest learning to use custom textures, but other then that the build is great and if I needed something I built I would definitely consider hiring you!

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Looks really good! Here are a few things I would change:

  • Use a different texture for the ceiling. I feel as if the current texture would more often be used for flooring. Instead, try to find a wood texture with long, horizontal shapes that might look like beams supporting the floor above it.

  • Add some more decorations on the exterior of the building. In the area out front, I would add some gardens for bushes or trees, and maybe some benches as well.

  • Add some struts supporting the staircase. Right now it appears as if certain steps are floating. Unless this decision was intentional, I would add some metal struts below each step to make the staircase look more realistic.

As for your question about how long you should wait until you start commissions, I would say that it can’t hurt to start as soon as possible! Things might be slow at first, however, until you develop a larger portfolio.

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I should of said the floating stairs was intentional haha.

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