Hello, I am Olly.
I’ve built a few creations throughout the years which I am pretty pleased with however would still love feedback as I would love to get even better. I’m fine with a lot of criticism as it will help me to improve however any compliments too would be great. : )
Please keep in mind some screenshots provided are builds that are nowhere near fully completed.
If you do like my work please like this post, it would mean a lot to me! 
They are so COOL! They look like they suit Royale High! Keep up the effort 
Thank you!! A lot of the people who inspire me seem to be builders for Royale High. I appreciate your compliment.
What exactly is this map for? Witch one is the main? I can’t really rate this because I have no background info.
I mainly just wanted feedback on the various builds I’ve provided and how I could improve some things in any of them. Majority of the builds I have created above are from when I’ve been bored.
I think she is showing us the full map with all the images together, and then maybe showing us the builds separately to rate them?
Hii👋🏽 @elorahi!! I love the builds❤️there very colorful and bright🎨but some things you could do to improve them are…
-On the last picture, the structure seems too blocky & simplistic compared to the other builds where different shapes are used. There is also a lack of detail on this structure…
-I really like the use of both cylinders and rectangles in this one, it pulls together well… But maybe you could use different lights
Ex.)
-There is 0 color😭 but brown brown brown brown brown in this build which in my opinion looks good in a way but it would be great if more colors were incorporated into it to make it feel more lively
-I love👍🏽 the environment🌳 on this one, you used a variation of trees to make it less repetitive
-But I think this build could use more of that creativity and variation
-Seems like there’s something missing🤔 maybe a bridge to get to the other side (?)
-This appears to be floating due to the water, so I would suggest extending the pink part a little bit further down
-If this is a water fall in the background, why isn’t it connected to a mountain or hill or something?
-Couldn’t help but notice but this seems like a huge step for a player to walk up does it not?
Okay, I think that’s all for now…
-I liked all the builds overall👍🏽, they were very colorful and bright so great job⭐ and good luck🍀 on your future projects Olly!
Thank you so much, this was amazing feedback & exactly what I was looking for & will make sure to implement them to my builds. Thank you so much for your time & efforts to giving me some feedback.
Love it! But please, in image 5, make the rocks slate, not wood.
