Feedback on my builds

Hello, I have been trying to do more stuff on Studio and wondering how good these are thank you.

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They look good :upside_down_face:

I would suggest stepping outside of your comfort zone and experimenting with different types of building(Realistic, Low Poly/Meshes, Semi-Realistic etc.)

Also, maybe change the particle texture from the default in the fireplace you have and maybe add a stand to the monitor.

Wish you well with your builds

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The monitor does have a stand just the angle does not show and I do not know how to make meshes and low poly as much.

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You could try Blender, it’s free and there are many, many tutorials to help you get started.

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I have blender 2.79 I can not get latest version but thank you for the advise do you have discord if so what is your tag?

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No I don’t have Discord, but good luck using Blender! :upside_down_face:

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They look wonderful! But the last picture of fireplace need more details and improvements. “BLC”, try change the different fonts to match style of fireplace! How about adding a mouse in the 2nd picture along with keyboard? Although, it’s great!

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Simplistic is the approach you’re wanting they look well made and I really like the basic and a little detailed look put into them. Overall I would really add different shapes and sizes of desk, a few more objects could be placed such as desk items perhaps put the desktop on the desk and go throw different color pallets to improve the quality of it, all desks don’t feature a bland light wooden brown look give your assets more detail to it.

At the start, it’s decent I would try using reference images to find color pallets and material choices I think it’s well put together, there nice models you could even make an asset pack out of these there’s a lot you can do hope to see you improve in the future.

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Well, for your desk in the first image, I appreciate the way you made it really look like a desk along with it’s wooden texture, though I noticed the desk’s drawers lacks handles. I would prefer and suggest you add silver handles for your desk drawers.

For your computer, it looks very simple and I do agree with @jordonh23 have said, though I noticed it lacked computer buttons for the screen to make it look like an on and off switch for the computer, maybe add a small button with the power logo.

Your skateboard also looks well-made though, I would suggest you make the wheels separate and maybe apply some different colors for it.

As for your fourth model, I’m quite uncertain if it’s a vending machine or another type of machine which I can not really give proper feedback on, maybe describe what the fourth model is.

It’s not a scoreboard it’s a low poly wood log bench and the monitor is wip and making more things for the desk and the desk has pull at the side draws

Ok, though thanks for making it clear concerning about the low poly wooden bench, it looks great but maybe add some wooden textures for the circle parts on front of the wood, as it appears to be wheels instead of wood.

Not bad, sadly they’re basic to my eye of detail but a great way to start.

they’re definitely a great start as said before me, for your desk & desktop model i would recommend using a reference that way it might be easier for you to stylize them to either be more or less realistic as you want!