Feedback on my cafe build

Hi, I need your feedback on my recent cafe project. Its concept revolves around a futuristic theme.

Right now, it is close to completion; however, I feel like the cafe looks especially empty, particularly the interior. What are your thoughts? I accept constructive criticism to improve.






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Honestly, I believe it looks excellent the way it is. I don’t think you need to add much, if anything, at all. If you feel it looks empty still, have you tried experimenting with some accent colors on the floor? Maybe it will give you the more compact appearance you’re looking for. Otherwise, it looks great.

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This is a very stunning build! Probably better than anything I could ever make…

I think it’s fine the way it is. I don’t see the need to add anything.

Just curious… is this a build for an upcoming game? If so, I may have to check it out.

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That’s actually stunning!

I don’t think there’s room for improvement but one thing slightly irritates me. The fact that the inside is just so full and the outside is for the most part, empty. Maybe adding slightly more things outside and making the inside a little less congested may solve that, but again, that’s my opinion on it.

It’s an amazing build other than that!

(i’m not a builder so pls don’t judge me)
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Agree with others.

Yes maybe it’s got a bit of an “empty” feel about it, but it’s a clean airy space “empty” not a where’s all the stuff, empty, if that makes sense.

If I was going to add anything at all, it would literally be an extra plant or two in strategic places just to break it up, but I certainly wouldn’t be trying to actively ADD more stuff.

I like it.

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I think you’re right, it has something to do with the floor. Thanks for the feedback!

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Thanks for the feedback! :grin:

Yes, it’s for my upcoming cafe game. You should check out our Twitter (X) page for more updates!
https://x.com/TiccoROBLOX

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Agreed. I’m not sure what else to add besides trees outside. Thanks for the feedback tho! :smiley:

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Great suggestion, will try it out soon. Thanks for the feedback! :heart:

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This cafe build looks VERY GOOD! NICE JOB ON IT!

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That is a lot of blue.

There is so much blue it is not much different than if you did the whole thing in black and white.

I think it looks empty because it looks cold and uncomfortable.

Maybe look up some Florida Keys or Miami Beach photos.

I think you need a lot more warmth a color variation.

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Thanks for the feedback. I think you can’t really see the warm colors because it was taken in night time. Here’s how the cafe looks like during day time:

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Dang, that gives a more of a warmth feel.

wish i was living life there-

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I know this isn’t real world design but I believe the “empty” feeling is because this building is absolutely massive compared to the scale of a player.

Now understanding that most players will play in third person views having double height spaces are good. However your building is pushing 4 or 5 stories tall.

This doesn’t mean you need to restart, but find ways to break up the height inside. Maybe consider adding a mezzanine level that overhangs the dining area? Add some partition walls to break up view lines. The goal is to decrease how far someone can see. If you can’t see something it’s much harder for someone to gauge the scale of the total size of a building.

Hope this helps, you have a very good design for a Roblox cafe game.

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By the way, the cafe is now out! You may check it out here:

Your support is highly appreciated, feel free to join our community!

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I really love the design! However, instead of having the player die when they try to enter the premium lounge without the gamepass, could you implement an invisible barrier that prevents entry? Additionally, it would be great to have a notification in the bottom left corner informing them that they don’t own the gamepass needed for access. Overall, the game is fantastic, and the UI is excellent. Keep making these good quality stuff.

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Hey, thanks for the feedback! We’ve received similar suggestions about the lounge barriers, and we’re excited to let you know that we’re implementing them in our first major update, which our team is currently hard at work on! There will be more exciting features in the game, but that’s all I can say for now! :grin::grin: