Feedback on my Cafe

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#1

Hello! I need some feedback on my cafe for my RP group. BloxBucks Cafe - Roblox. It is not done but here it is.

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Please give me suggestions or what you think about it.
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I took all of your suggestions into consideration.

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#2

It looks very cool, but I think it would look good with a sign that said BloxBucks Cafe.

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#3

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There is one inside.

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#4

I feel like the cafe is a little too bland. However I think you did a decent job on outlining the base structure, but it does not look complete. All you need to do now is add them details. For this, I recommend you search up images of cafe ceilings and walls, and take some inspiration from them, but look at them details carefully.

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#5

It looks good, but to me it looks more like a modern day house that a cafe. And the sign is a bit too small,
but other than that good build I like the style.

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#6

Good Idea! It is not done so it looks a little bland.

#7

It looks pretty good!
Here are my suggestions though:

  1. Like others said, it looks a little small and the colors look very basic. Maybe add some details so that it looks like there is more color to the build!
  2. The lighting is a bit odd, but I take this suggestion back if its just temporary!
  3. Last but not least, the white area with the window looks a little messy!

Other than that, it looks really good!

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#8

So the general theme here is that it looks generic, which in all honesty, it does. You have that basic built in the last five years vibe going on which is resepectable. It’s clean cut, and does relatively well. It’s low mid-poly, so you hit enough points to keep some players, but the build itself as a cafe is weird. It looks like it was built off of a house.

I’m not going to go on about lighting as I know it’s unfinished. When you get to atmosphere, focus on it. Lighting makes-or-breaks a game.

Add exterior plant beds so you get some green going on. The color will make your build pop out a bit.

#9

Suggestions:

  1. Lighting is a bit odd.
  2. Like others have said, it looks a bit bland. You could add a mini waterfall, or possible vines somewhere in or outside the cafe. All details help.

Overall, great job!

#10

Looks great, on my opinion change the lightning color, and the cafe looks house but I like the style.

#11

It looks pretty cool! Here are some questions:

  • Are there windows on the top floor? It looks like there’s none, or maybe it’s just a Roblox issue.
  • Fill in the interior! Add some tables, counters, or maybe even a large coffee conveyor (like a Starbucks shop in Tokyo, but I forgot its name).
#12

Alright thanks, And yes there is glass.