Hey Devforums, can I get some feedback?
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Itās ummmā¦ really basic? I recommend you trying to practice doing some more complicated builds.
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It looks extremely unfinished. Very basic. Try not to ask for feedback on unfinished things.
In the case that it is finished, it has no resemblance of a Cafe. Where are the tables? The menu? The restrooms?
Edit: I see youāre selling this on the public collaboration sub. Why? Itās not up to par with what should be sold. If you were to ask me what this is without me already knowing, I wouldnāt be able to guess that itās a Cafe. Please do not sell things youāve just made with no feedback or polish just for the sake of getting some Robux. Itās very bad practice.
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The corners of the walls are really basic (and absent), the glass seem to connect to nothing, you should try fixing it. Also, when building, always try different things and see wich result looks the best.
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Add more detail. Hard to give feedback when you do not really got like much.
It can use more furniture and modern structure, try looking at other peopleās cafeās and see how theirs look like.
Hey there! In my opinion this build as many others have mentioned is on the more basic side, however, I think that another thing that you should try work on is using inspiration for your work. Since you want to make a cafe Iād look for an image of a cafe such as this:
That way you can look for colours and designs to suit what youāre building, as right now itās fairly difficult to see it as a Cafe. I wish you good luck in future builds and look forward to what you can make!
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Iām aware! I had to go out. I couldnāt finish it. I added tables (doing seats rn). Thanks your for input in my development.
In my opinion, for a more realistic building you should get out of the gray-plastic materials you are using. I would personally change the floor to wood planks with an orange-yellow tone, add some windows and make the space between the red parts of the walls equal each other, plus some cool lights. For a better design I would explore other Cafeās and see what you could improve.
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This cafe looks very basic and unfinished. You should also provide some more information about what style of build you are trying to make and your current skill level with building.
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The red bits on the walls look like they are randomly placed. You should consider making it so there is an equal spacing between each one.
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Inside the cafe, it looks dark so you should consider experimenting with some lighting to get a more welcoming feel.
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The colour scheme for this build doesnāt really go well together. For example the grey tables and grey floor donāt go well together.
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I am not a huge fan of having the whole of the ceiling and walls glass. You should reduce the amount of glass you have.
When building these sorts of things in the future you should look at some existing builds and images of the thing that you are trying to build. Doing this will give you inspiration and something to get ideas from. Here is a few cafes on roblox you should consider looking around to get ideas:
https://www.roblox.com/games/961426258/HOUSES-Koala-Cafe
https://www.roblox.com/games/430367172/Soros-Italian-Restaurant
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It looks too basic. Try looking st others peoples cafes and, maybe add some modern furniture.
Iād say itās really rushed and wrong way started. You could first try laying it out, make floor designs or change material, Less window frames. With a bit of time you could try more things. You could try differeny layouts, or creating your own! Simplify it as you want, try making it more realistic or the type you want it to be. Check buildings from google or other people and take inspiration.
Hey JJackTed!
Your build looks good so far, however itās a little basic and. Doesnāt have that much details in the inside part or the building itself. However here is a couple of things you could improve on to make your cafe stand out more! i believe you will get the right style your, looking for just keep on practicing and youāll get there. Here is a couple of things you could, add to your cafe and change to look a lot more better!!
Cafe
Your cafe seems to be a little basic as i said below, you could add different shapes to it just to give it some details. I would recommend you add some color/texture to the building instead of making the whole building a āGlass partā l would go with a stone, brick, marble, plumant faux, ect. To make it stand out more you could always! play around with the colors/material to find the one that fits on your building and the inside part. I would suggest you go add a texture, to your cafe and try adding different colors to itā¦
Cafe Entrance
When you make a cafe you want to make, sure you add a lot of different details to the building. To make it stand out more iāll add some chairs, tables, umbrellas, plants, trees, sign, ect. On the outside part so people can sit! and enjoy there āCoffeeā and i would suggest, you implement a parking lot so people can enter. The building or add a sidewalk just for people, to enter however if you look below youāll see that the outside area. Has different details to it such as awning, on the building and some plants next, to the door area and some. Lights to it just to give it some decorations to make people fill welcome, as well try scaling the walkway out more. So you could add the different details to the outside part.
Reference
Try adding some double doors to your cafe. And different details to it as i said above!
Windows
I see you didnāt add no windows to your cafe. But there seems to be the frames onto it building all over it however iāll, add some dividers on them as will make the frame go! across so the windows can be like square parts as most. Cafes have those on the windows and then you could make tall ones and, different shapes to them to not look plain, if you want a reference image of it will be! below just make sure you make it more. Detailed to make it look more like a cafe!!
Example
Inside Part
The inside area of the building, doesnāt seem to have no details in the inside part. I would recommend you add some details, to it such as chairs, tables, plants, lights, counter top, menu, shelves, coffee bags, decorations, ect. As well add some colors to your, chairs and tables to make it look more better. And you could add some wood, stone, textures to them if you plan! on doing that but i would suggest you add some wood material. With a black color on the circle part of the table however you could play around with different colors to find the perfect one that fits on them
Reference Interior
Details
Here is a couple of equipments. Your cafe needs and the different details to add to it, you add menus, napkins, cups, coffee bags, cookies, donuts, yogurt, granola, ect. Those are just details you could add in your cafe to get people interested, to see what your cafe haves!
- Drip Coffee Makers
- Coffee Presses
- Coffee Beans
- Coffee Brewers
- Blenders
- Espresso Machine
- Espresso Grinder
Overall, your cafe is a nice start so for it looks really good. Canāt wait to see the final product of the building soon, just make sure you practice and improve some things! to make it look decent iāll add some more details, in the inside area and the building itself. Get some ideas from other cafes that will really help you a lot more.
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