Feedback on my Cafe?

I’d appreciate any highly detailed feedback, (I did NOT build this) though I am getting my friend to add instead implement a bridge as the spawn that leads to the cafe and maybe some type of deck on the side.

DISCLAIMER: This was not made by me

  • What are you attempting to achieve? A somewhat detailed looking cafe that’s not too large but can accomplish a nice place for users to chill and relax while having a sip of coffee.

  • What is the issue? I am so conflicted about what to add and some concepts to include, the outside is definitely the big thing I am having trouble thinking of.

  • What solutions have you tried so far? As previously stated above I’m having the builder include a nice big bridge as the spawn that leads to the cafe and hopefully have the surrounding area be a mini shore of some sort. (Trees are also something I plan to change)


Thank you for taking the time to read this!

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Great design and creativity on the actual cafe, but I have a few thing’s that could improve it:

  • Smooth out the terrain were the sand meets the sea, right now the stop of it looks very sudden and blocky.
  • Add some differentiation on the heights of the tree’s that are on the outer most bit of land, they look to symmetrical and un-natural
  • It looks very dark and gloomy, I don’t know if you just haven’t added lighting yet or if its the quality but try adding some lighting effects to bring out the cafe and tree’s
  • Once you’ve added lighting change the waters transparency up and make it a more baby blue like it’s on the coast, this will give it that beachy vibe that I’m assuming you’re looking for.
  • Maybe add a few small islands dotted around the sea in front of your cafe.
  • This is just my preference but I’m not a big fan of the realistic type tree’s, try adding some low-poly palm tree’s instead.

Other than that I have no other thing’s you could improve on, the cafe looks great and I think players and staff will enjoy it.

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I am not a builder, but i will give my feedback as if i am a visitor. I think the cafe looks very good but one thing is that all trees look almost the same, and the trees seem to be upright, I think maybe changing the looks of trees and then bend the tree a little

Wow, that looks really cool.
Beautiful textures, and the cafe itself!:+1:

I’d suggest you edit the world terrain. When doing Terrain, go to “Sea Level” and scale that to the size and length/width you want.

Also, the trees look choppy and over used.

The cafe interior looks great especially with the roof, multi-floor, and other decorations. However, as a visitor I would prefer to see the workers closely when I walk in. That’s just a preference and could go either way! Great build.

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Lovely cafe, the detail inside is amazing. Your friend has some excellent skills there, I would hope to see some more of his work in the future!