Hello my is walker i was wondering if i can get some feedback and suggestions on my cafe premium grill
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It’s a bit tacky. Most of the items I’m seeing such as the lanterns and furniture are free models, you need to link these models before showcasing your work! I dislike the terrain completely, it’s extremely blocky and bold. How about a smooth plastic texture, and instead of big blocks of dirt keeping people from jumping over, take the blocks and make them invisible! I dislike the vague use of low-poly and materialistic, for example, the trees are low-poly, so should the terrain. Your stairway concrete, compared to the more cream colored concrete shouldn’t be different colors. This build could use some work, but overall nice job!
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I agree with @greybirks … the free models isn’t really a good way to open your cafe and show your work to others. It can be seen as a sign of dishonesty and non authenticity.
The inside is depressing. Grey is overused and the brick looks not that great. Try to use different textures and colors.
The lighting needs some work.
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I’m not a huge fan of the inside. The inside is very empty and a little too big. I also am not really a huge fan of the terrain, it’s a little basic and tacky. I also see random little grass pieces outside which looks really weird. The outside is also empty if you look in the 1st picture. It needs some work.
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