Feedback on my Coffee Shop

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Today i made this coffee house and i loved the result.
Also, i would like some feedback on my build! Be honest!

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Thanks for your attention (:

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#2

I love it! Although one thing that just didn’t fit was the “open” sign. Maybe try adding one of those green neon signs instead. Otherwise, great build!

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#3

Thanks for the feedback! I agree with you, i’ll change it to green and maybe try another font :coffee: :heart:

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#4

Thats insane, have you edited the lighting to make it more realistic? If not you should try it. But the island or whatever it is is too square

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#5

Thanks for the reply! I used future lighting and some configurations. :bulb:
About the “island”, i put the water just to take a good up-view picture, it’s a temporary thing!

#6

It’s really good! I suggest toning down the lighting as you can see in that one spot it’s kind of blurry. Other than that, nice work!

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#7

Nothing I would change at all, very nice build :smiley:

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#8

I like the build, but as a personal preference, I would suggest changing or alter the lighting to fit with the style you are going for. If you need some help I am sure there are many posts in it somewhere the devforum or even youtube.

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