Feedback on my compositions


I’m trying to get my foot in the composer door, please let me know what you think of these songs!

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Your onto the right track, but your song lacks in melodies. I keep expecting notes to jump at me when ever I’m listening to your songs. Like your first song is a good example of that. Where as for your second song, I reckon your notes just need work on.

Other than that, pretty good!

Keep up the great work!

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The first track reminds me of Command & Conquer, especially Rain in the Night. Here’s the reference I’m referring to:

Your track has creepy elements that sounds like sirens or at least it sounds menacing, yet strange in nature. It could fit some ambience of a horror game.

For the second track, it’s club-themed or high-speed chase-related. I think it reminds me of Paul Oakenfold or Paul van Dyk. They sound similar in rhythm to these:

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I hear what you mean about the second song lacking melody. Thank you

Thanks for the feedback and examples, they give me something to work forward to. I do think strange ambience into intense chase music will be my focus, similar to Kelly Bailey’s Half-Life tracks.

I’m no expert. But I think you should compare your 2nd track to this:

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