Feedback on my core game so far?

Builder Level 3: Advanced builders, people who are at this point pretty much completely acquainted with Roblox Studio, not afraid to use plugins to make high quality building easier. Builds are of great quality with extensive details integrated everywhere.
Popular examples: Temples, palasts, mansions, facilities.

To get Innovation Inc.'s Builder L3 rank I’m making a core game, mainly focusing on the details in builds as the Builder L3 rank doesn’t have scripting as criteria.

I’d like some feedback on my game so far. You can find it at Untitled Game - Roblox.

This might sound a bit picky… I’m trying to help if you feel-uncomfortable i will delete this.
List of stuff I noticed:

  • Wheres the core?
  • The walls on the lobby are too empty
  • Every content has its own style, the gate is jail style, the walls are bathroom style, the plants are realistic but the other places feel rather cartoonish
  • Everything but the floor is texturized
  • Harsh truth: The more types of colors you have the more children-painting it looks

Suggestion on how to improve it: Make sure the total number of colors doesn’t go above 4. Use the default Roblox materials. Find reference, from movies, other games, CG paintings and stuff, pick the style you like the most and try to investigate what makes you like it. Then add that element that you like to your own build, just make sure you don’t PASTE a whole thing into your build (or its copy-ing), put elements of different pieces of other’s work together and make it your own(And make sure the styles fit).

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