Feedback on my creation without free models

Good day/night!
I just finished doing a big appartment or a small house with no free model, only meshes and studio materials and blocks, any feedback or how can I improve will be kept in mind for my next build, also tell me how do you rate it from 1/10. Thank you!

Game link > Premiun Appartment showcase - Roblox

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the setting looks nice.
my critique would be that it feels kind of empty. it only took me like 5 minutes to really see everything. i feel like you should add more furnature and give the bedrooms alittle more decoration for personality. Try to imagine the people living there and how they would decorate the place. Are they messy people who like punk rock, or geeky people who love comics.
You should also add some color to make things pop.

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Okay thank you, I will try to make more furniture , your feedback will be kept in mind.

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can you send screenshots? i can’t play atm

Yes I will send screenshots of the build.






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looks nice
But there are some small problems

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Okay, I will fix that bug later, thank you.

Maybe decorate it with a few free model plants to give it a pop of color and make it less empty looking.

I am using 0% free model so I wont add those plants, I will make them myself.

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thats reallly nice! it looks like very beginnner because…Screen Shot 2021-11-01 at 3.51.55 PM
seams in the floor texture

the models don’t look very professional, but i want to know, if you aren’t using outside resources, how did you make the floor textuure and this?Screen Shot 2021-11-01 at 3.52.47 PM
i have lots more feedback but don’t have time to give it

Thats a texture not a free model

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Free models = Models, Animations, Decals, Textures, Audios


oh. ok then. maybe change the title then? and it actually is a texture because what else free models can be textures

There are some things that are very clear when talking about beginner developers

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those 3D letters for example, i dont recomend using it, it looks very bad you should try using simple text plates

Another thing:


There are pratically no textures and also, there are some things like the white sun lounger that looks giant

After that there are some small but at the same time giant problems like these burners image
You can make it simetrycal right by selecting one, then press ctrl + d and use move it to the side you want, instead of ctrl c and ctrl v then trying to make it symetrical

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Also you need to make expanded textures, put it in right side, top side, left side not only the front side, it is very notable

And for last (there are some other things but you will discover with time).
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You should try copying the ball and the circle (the glass) and using ctrl + d then changing the scale to make it lower, then change the color.

Also there are some free models, but it is not a problem for now you will stop using it when you have more experience in building, keep geting better bud! Hope it helped

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ok thanks and thanks for telling me about the ctrl d key

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