Feedback on my current project game

For the past few weeks I have been making a mystery/story game that involves the player to hunt for clues and find out the why this place has been deserted. That’s the idea anyways. I honestly don’t know if people would be interested in such a game so I thought I would ask you guys if you could check the game out and see if such a game could get an audience. Obviously the game is not finished, but there is just enough in the game to get an idea of what it could become. Any feedback is much appreciated!

Sincerely,
Porchegt3

Here is the link to the game; Beyond The Clouds - Roblox

Hello, here are some suggestions after trying the game:

  1. Collisions.
    Many collisions are bugged and it is really annoying.
  2. Objective.
    If it weren’t for your post, it wouldn’t be clear to me what the goal of the game is.
  3. Art
    The artistic style, whether in the UI, buildings, terrain, has several styles, you should look for a single style, in some parts it looks like a low poly game so that 2 steps more is a realistic game.
  4. Lighting
    Please change that lighting, it is horrible, I would recommend adding atmosphere, and more saturation and also changing the texture of the sky,
  5. Translation
    I appreciate that you wanted to translate the game into Spanish but it is quite incomplete.
    Well those are some things I noticed, I hope you like my suggestions
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I forgot to say that the game also lacks something attractive that makes me want to play it.

Thank you for that thorough reply. I must say that I do agree with you on the lighting aspect of the game and I will educate myself on how to improve it. The rest of your feedback is quite accurate and so I will try to tackle these points when I have the time.

Thanks again

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