Hi there, I’m looking for some feedback on an obby I made. It is my first game and also please be honest and I don’t mind if your feedback is harsh but I hope you like my game!
(I’m aware of the z fighting and I’m trying to fix it right now)
Thanks!
There are many misalignments making the obby look bad, fix those.
I am currently in class right now so I can’t test it but the thumbnail is looking amazing, with nice lighting and everything else! Nice Job!
I am on mobile right now and the UI is misaligned. The spectate and restart are in each other.
Good game though.
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Its a good obby but its very similar to other difficulty char obbys, like Masters Difficulty Char obby for example.
this is a problem:
I don’t like the fact that you have gone for content over quality in the form of there a no real inventive stages which I haven’t seen before.
Ok thanks for letting me know. Im going to try fixing that as well.
It’s good for a first game, but I’ll have to critique a lot of things here
First off:
Now the actual stuff that you could change:
It needs to be unique in a sort of way, it can’t just be like every other regular obby game
I’m playing in a Windowed Resolution, and all I can see is the cut-off image of this (Might wanna consider fixing that):
(Yes thank you for this very inspirational quote)
The Lighting & Skybox feel a bit too bright, I personally don’t like the view of it
The part colors feel a bit too bland, not saying it’s bad but just lacking in creativity
I mean overall it’s ok, but do learn from these mistakes to hopefully improve & learn more about these kinds of things 
I really appreciate your detailed feedback on my game. I’m going to try fix and revamp the game based on what you so it can become better. 
