Feedback on my diner I built

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#1

Hello! This is a diner in the desert. What can I improve here? inside/outside

GAME LINK: Desert Diner [SHOWCASE] - Roblox

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#2

Looks nice only thing is the lighting but the lighting doesnā€™t affect it to much it looks really nice and shows what Roblox developers can really do keep it up.

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#3

Not the best diner ever, but I can say itā€™s a great success to create something like this that I almost canā€™t build one. Good job.

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#4

it looks likeā€¦ Bloxburger in ā€œAdopt and Rise cute Kid gameā€
anyway it looks aweasome i appreciate that :+1:

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#5

Thank you guys for the feedbacks! I really appreciate that! :wink:

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#6

For a low-polyish model, it looks fairly well-made. Great work!

The only thing you can improve on IMO is the color-scheme. I notice that the red color of the tiles in the roof, the sofas, the stools and the counter are very much alike. I would suggest you use some lighter/deeper shades of red in some of the objects to give it a more realistic feel.

Hereā€™s a website I use to pick color schemes for my builds:

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#7

Looks good overall!

Just two things, turn down the lighting a little bit, its too bright for a diner

Also, on the first picture, I noticed that the parking lot and the environment looks pretty empty, how about adding some details. Since its a desert I see there, how about adding some cactus, and maybe some cars that been placed at 2 or 3 slots of the parking lot, so it gives the ā€œwelcomeā€ feel there

But overall, great work mate!

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#8

Thank you for the Paletton! :slight_smile:

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#9

It looks messy in some parts and is undetailed in some. If itā€™s low-poly, itā€™s kind of fine. Either way, the cactus looks bizarre, and so does the burger on the top. Fix your assets a bit and itā€™d be presentable.

#10

I like the way you used the colours on interior and exterior , they look bright , fresh and attractive.
And the desert environment looks so good.

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#11

Thank you for the nice feedback! Have a nice day. :wink:

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#12

Hello there.

While this model definitely looks great, it still has some room for improvements.

First of all, iā€™d suggest you to add a couple of mountains all over the map so it gives it a little more realistic vibe.

Also, try playing around with the lightings as it is definitely key to improving how your map looks. Since your map is a desert and you canā€™t really see too far away iā€™d recommend you using DepthOfFieldEffect & ColorCorrectionEffect.

Other than that, the inside seems to be just fine. Carry on, this is some good work right here.

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