Hello, so recently i got back into building and i decided to build a cute little doughnut shop! please give me some feedback i’d really appreciate it!
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Cute Doughnut shop - Roblox
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not bad but need more work and the neon must need to low by using bloom on the lightning section and also need more things inside of the doughnuts shop. but the best thing I have seen so far is Gui.
I hope you have wonderful day and i hope this will be helping you finish the game…
cya
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Thank you for taking the time to go into detail I really really really appreciate it, it will help a lot
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I am not sure if you already do this, but one thing I do is I create a color/ material palette before I even spawn in a part. Then, I work on an idea/ outline (sometimes I even sketch it out). After that, I try to make it flow buy making sure every distance is even. This is done by making sure every movement is done by the same increments. Additionally, make sure that it is not too big, if it is, you can add walls and barriers to make it feel more… cozy. You do not want a giant room with a few tables and a chair. Lastly, get reference images. Reference images never hurt, just make sure you don’t copy.
Good luck building!
-EnderDoge36
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I really love the colour used on this doughnut shop. I’d just recommend not using neon on most of the things on the doughnut shop as it then becomes too bright for a player. I’d also recommend expanding the doughnut shop and possibly adding some interior such as chairs , cashiers and paintings. I’d also recommend adding textures on the wall outside to enhance the look of the detail on the building. Other than that it’s an amazing build and good work overall.
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