I’m doing an advertising campaign with 5 different ads for 1k Robux each, I need to know if these attract the players in one way or another, what are your thoughts above the ads? could I do anything to improve them?
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sheeeesh 10/10 nice drawings! i really like the style its drawn in!
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For me, the details are pretty good, and the writing seems readable. Very cool. 
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I like the idea of a hand-drawn ad, but the ads here seem rather cluttered with unnecessary text. In the first skyscraper and banner ads I’d remove the nametags on the players as they don’t serve any specific purpose, and in the second skyscraper I’d either remove the “pick me” text or blend it more with the colours of the button it’s on top of.
The text clipping off this button is also a bit unappealing; consider making the text wrapped.