Your dungeon crawler game, looks really good like all the different details, you added to your game. However there is a couple of things i’ll recommend! fixing on your game to look more better. Overall the game looks really great!
Your gui the one at the top assuming, it’s your “Health Bar” it’s a little to high at the top and it seems to be cutting some of it. Out of the screen i would recommend you fix that! and bring it on screen so people. Can see it and know what it is! As well the one at the bottom of the screen some of it is cut out. You could bring it up a little so it could look more better!!
As you can see some of your gui is cut. Out of the screen, and you could place the '100 Bar" on top of the player i believe that is where it’s suppose, to be not at the top of the screen as it looks a little hard to see what it is.
As you can see your pyramid looks really good however you have a sign named. Coming Soon but people can still go inside it, and think that it works. You could add a visible part to the door part so other users can’t, go inside it so it looks like that is in progress still. I would recommend you add that! And when buying inaccessible from the shops some of them are broken, as you can see when you buy them the item. Is faced the wrong way and it’s a little, big you could fix them so they could work a little more!!
Broken Inaccessible
When you go to the pigeon land the health bar gui ,some of it is cut out of the screen you could move it over so you can see the whole bar. And the inaccessible the sword is broken as you can see when you press it the sword gets! stuck in the ground part meaning, you can’t kill the pigeons only if you place it on them they will die. I would suggest fixing that so people, can kill the little pigeons and the sword as well. And the health bar on the pigeons, stays stuck at “0” that is not suppose to happen, i would check to see whats going on there…
I would also fix the, thumbnail because the image you added cuts out when. You teleport back to the main area. And the pigeon land as well the gui, when you click the player that is in the pigeon land some of the text is cut of the screen. As you can see below i would place them on the screen so it could work on all devices! but if you leave it like that it would be a little, hard to press the UI to talk. To the characters you added you could fix those a bit more!!
Gear/Pigeons
Overall, you have done a great job on your game so far. As provided above you could add away to view how many pigeons! you have to kill to get to the other side. Keep it up hope to see the final product of the map very soon!!