Feedback on my first 3d gfx

hello dev forum, i have created a roblox 3d gfx for the first time and i am seeking feedback on it. what should i improve/change?

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Post this in #help-and-feedback:creations-feedback

And btw your GFX is amazing.

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oops i forgot to, thanks for reminding me

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Looks great! What I would change is the text in the bottom right. Its resolution is too low.

This 3D GFX looks VERY GOOD! GREAT JOB ON IT! How long did it take to create it?

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Very good for your first 3d GFX. You might want to fix the legs, as they look like they are floating. Also, you might want to make the floor something other than that ice looking material. You should add more to the background other than just the table and chair.

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nice, btw where did you get the characters from?

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woah, this is your first?? this is so good!
my only suggestions are that the room looks quite empty, i notice a table in the background so i think you should add a few more to make the room look full. the characters don’t look like they’re on the ground, and their positions are a bit stiff, so i think you need to make the limbs bend less sharply. otherwise, this is really good!

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its good but it looks a little lame for a game called “super air hockey”. they look pretty bored and i feel like the thumbnail could be a little more extreme

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