Feedback On My First Advertisement

Hello! Recently I have decided to take a break from studio and look into art design (clothing, advertisements, GFX, etc). This is the first time I have ever made an advertisement for my friend’s group. Give me honest feedback and keep in mind I am a beginner. Also I know there is a little white at the top.

It’s ok…

i recommend that, you should add a background to it. example: modern mountains

i also recommend that you use a different text font. it looks bland and boring. Fonts like “Titan One” is more joyful, and more people will click it.

My rating of the ad: 4/10

Thank you! It is my first and I apologize about it’s low quality but I will try and do better in the future.

To be honest, I don’t think the ad is really good and I agree with @EcholexWasTaken’s rating. BUT, I have seemed to notice that ads like these have decent click through rates as younger kids(who make up most of roblox) find this appealing for some reason and click on it.

I agree! His group is sort of cartoony so I could see it appealing to a younger audience.