Feedback on my First and Second GFX

:fire:I’ve been started doing GFX on 3 days ago. Im a new on blender, but i have been using photoshop for 3-4 years. :fire:

Please comment a feedback to improve my skills…
my fav artist: i5k <3

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They both look pretty good. Although the first one parts are a bit too blurry in my opinion.

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There to blurry. Why does it look like everybody’s floating?

Yes this is a problem. I will fix it in another gfx .Thanks for feedback!

hmm, I tried to give motion blur effect there but its too much, you are right.Thanks for feedback!

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Second attempt looks alright from my point of view, I’m assuming your still learning different posing selections? If so that is something you should take in the future when wanting to improve your graphic design a little more.

The first design shows not much going on even if you’re going for a simplicity design. Try placing more characters I’m assuming too characters running to the other side of the planet or fighting there enemies. You need to include more things that look interesting - attractive if the too characters are running chasing each other include more people fighting on the other side of the planet.

The second graphic design the posing seems stiff there’s a lot of objects that seem to be floating and looking out of place is this intentional? The lighting it kind of has that alright appearance to it if this is a cherry tree include fruits on it to look more interesting the lighting seems fine.

Otherwise it’s a good start i would just focus more on your posing and overall lighting if your wanting a cartoony, realistic or a bit of realism added to both of the scenes.

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I will use this information in my next gfx ~~ :heart:Thanks a lot for your feedback!

Your work is awesome. This amazing GFX cannot go unseen. May I ask how much you would charge for a thumbnail?

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I made these thumbnails for my friends. the first of these thumbnails for 150R$ and the second for 250R$ yeah i know it is so cheap

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