Hey guys, I haven’t really built much before and I wanted some feedback on where I could improve in my new project. The game link is here:
This building is excellent! I will list out some things I would change.
- Why is the “vibe” text lowercase?
- The empty area in the second picture could use a rug or a metal post to add some detail.
A metal post sounds like a good idea, and I don’t really know why I put vibe in lowercase.
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Very cool looking, although in the future I think a little tidying goes a long way. When you make future releases/showcases it would be nice if everything was enclosed and fully finished, because I fell out of bounds almost immediately by accident.
Another underrated addition to a showcase is interactable/moving pieces. It’s cool that you had a somewhat working elevator (hopefully it will be animated in the future), but adding interactables for props such as turning the lamp on/off etc. is always very cool. The working clock is an amazing touch!
The music was also very very loud, and some other people in the lobby mentioned this too. I would recommend lowering it. On the same note, ambient sound can really bring the best out in a build to draw a player in. The music could be coming from a physical source (speakers), and fall off as you get further from it. You could even make the music toggleable by making the speaker interactable. Other recommendations could be something like a water fountain with trickling water sounds, button press sounds if you do make interactables, and moving elevator sounds if you animate the elevator.
Goodluck on future builds!
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Thank you! This is really helpful feedback, especially the music being a great idea along with interactable props.
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Very well constructed and detailed. I really like the modern feel to this build and the open plan areas. As it sits right now it’s looking great however it could do with so much more added onto it and some extra detail and features. Regardless, Very well done!
Best Regards!
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It looks pretty good, although it could use some more wall decor, furniture, and maybe another wall dividing the kitchen from the main lounge. So far it looks really good! Gl with you project! 
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Really appreciate the feedback guys 