Feedback on my first blender model

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#1

Yeees!I downloaded the blender yesterday!And here is my first model (which I made yesterday).

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Wait your feedback!Bye! :wave:

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#2

You could try to rotate the triangles more or play with loop cuts and even bevel modifiers.

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#3

I suggest putting the cones closer to eahc other, they look a little far apart.

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#4

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Here is the result!
(I had to open the studio again, as it crashed)

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#5

That’s such an improvement from the original post. You are doing great.

The only thing that I’d suggest doing from here would be to move each layer of the tree a little closer together. I also suggest making the bottom triangle the biggest and gradually get smaller as you reach the top.

By doing these two things you will have a much more aesthetically pleasing tree design. So far you are doing great. Keep it up!

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#6

Try changing the lighting. And maybe remove the glare on the tree. Great work!

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#7

Its a significant improvement from what you originally showed.
Maybe try changing the shapes of the cones more as your next practice.
Maybe try making the bottom of the cone less flat by cutting it a bit.

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#8

Could you lower the cones some more? Make it so thee bases of the cones are nearly touching each other.

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