Feedback on my first build!

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#1

Hii! I recently made a house and I would like to hear feedback so I can improve! :happy3:

I know it’s kind of dark but that’s just my style.

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Any feedback appreciated!

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#2

That is insanely well made for your first build. The only thing that’s bothering me in the misalignment here. Use this plugin to resize align any parts.

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#3

Thank you! And I’ll try to fix that.

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#4

Very cool! Keep up the good work!

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#5

Thank you very much! I appreciate it!

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#6

In my opinion the lightning on the door was too bright a4
although I am not a builder so don’t take my words seriously but the overall build was pretty cool kinda like it but I think you can do better than that keep practicing and keep moving forward. Keep it up! :+1: :+1: :+1: :+1: :+1:

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#7

Alright, I’ll fix that, and thanks!

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#8

Honestly, not bad! I love the layout and the design. Keep up the great work.

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#9

Thank you very much!! I’m glad you like it!

#10

Wow! Looks amazing. Normally when I make city games we use Roblox studio related parts because poly parts don’t fit into the game neither enhance the role playing experience but keep up the good work.

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#11

Awesome house man, keep the good work up!

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#12

Thank you very much! That’s very kind of you! :grinning_face_with_smiling_eyes:

#13

Thank you! I appreciate your feedback! :happy2:

#14

It seems grass is randomly coming out of the conrete :hushed:

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Overall good :relaxed:
Could maybe use a more suitable surrounding area, but good :v:

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#15

Oh, I’ll try to fix that, thanks!