Feedback on my first build!

Help and Feedback Creations Feedback
, ,
#1

Hello, I’ve nearly completed my first build! I’m attempting to create a low poly flower shop/cafe. I’m still in the process of making plant, table & chair models, however this is my progress so far.

Please let me know if there’s anything I can change or add to improve my build!

Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.36.59 PM
Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.36.59 PM1780×1072 70 KB

Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.37.40 PM
Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.37.40 PM1780×1072 58.9 KB

Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.37.55 PM
Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.37.55 PM1780×1072 59.6 KB

Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.38.09 PM
Screen Shot 2023-01-20 at 9.38.09 PM1780×1072 60.9 KB

6 Likes
#2

Yo it’s looks good. But it should delete this carpet
image

1 Like
#3

Why did you post another time? You had already made one…
Sorry @a_artvor292YT disnt want to reply to you :rofl::rofl::rofl:

#4

love the way the bricks are randomly arranged at the bottom. gives it a cool unique look!

#5

Great job! This looks like 20 times better than the low poly builds that are used in popular games. And that for your first build… Well done!! I love it.

#6

Heres some tips/ideas:

Screenshot 2023-01-21 at 20.00.33
Screenshot 2023-01-21 at 20.00.331920×1149 82.1 KB

  • Make the top part above the windows a little wider than the sides of the window
  • Add detail to that green wall in the back
  • Change the side of the overhang thing it looks kinda off to me
  • Maybe you could rescale some of the parts of the table or rotate them just by a few degrees. This adds some more variation and adds a lot to your build (just the the random bricks on the side of your building

I hope this helps!

1 Like
#7

Just like what @a_artvor292YT said, I don’t think the carpet is necessary. Other than that, it’s a really great model.

#8

nice job buddy, it’s so cool :+1:

#9

this looks really cool and comfy! the only thing i’d personally suggest is to make the table shorter because it looks a little tall. unsure though, since there’s no dummy or anything for me to compare sizes lol. otherwise good job!