Feedback on my first build

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I made a bus stop please give me feedback this is my first build. Everything has been made in studio. I used 3 plugins road creator, 3d text, gapfill.

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In my opinion the bus stop looks good, but there is more to work on.

I have some ideas for what you can add more:

  • a bus
  • Make the road longer
  • Make NPCs get on the bus I suggested.
  • There will be more NPCs coming on the bus.
  • The bus coming and going (repeat).

Besides all the suggestions and improvements, your work on the bus station is great keep up like this! :grinning:

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As a beginner that’s actually pretty decent! You’ve utilized corner wedges and wedges which is a mountain all on their own. (They can get pesky later on when you deal with smaller builds, so just watch out!)

Some word of advice though:

  • As proud as you are of this build, I do suggest adding a tad bit more before posting it on the developer forums.

  • Bus should be spelt the correct way on both sides of the sign, give it a mirror flip.

  • It’s a tad bit plain, maybe add some NPC’s like @ItzSoEpic suggested, even if they’re noobs, it gives aesthetic.

But keep it up! And most developers will deny this claim - but - don’t be afraid to use free models! All beginning builders need to start somewhere, and if you’re unsure on how to build something, look it up in the tool box! Just don’t be excessive with them! It still needs to be your own work.

That’s all the advice I’ve got for ya!

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Thank you for supporting my proposal

“It’s a tad bit plain, maybe add some NPC’s like @ItzSoEpic suggested, even if they’re noobs, it gives aesthetic”

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It’s very stylish and looks epic. But I think you should try giving some materials for parts. It would look way more advanced with different materials, in my opinion.

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It looks pretty cool, especially as your first build. But here are some suggestions you could add:

  • More textures. The bus stop looks pretty plain and basic, could need more work.

  • Decoration. You could add some posters on the pillars of the bus stop.

  • Make the roof a bit thicker. The roof looks pretty thin… Way to thin…

  • Flip the sign that says “BUS”

And yeah, that’s about it. Good job on your first build! :+1:

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That’s awesome! The only suggestion I have is to add lights. Anyways, keep building!