Feedback on my First Build

Hello,

Would you be kind enough to give me some genuine feedback on my first build? :grinning:

Took me a couple of hours.
The only free model I used was a nature pack.

Am I any good?


SMALL COTTAGE

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This. Looks. Amazing. I find it hard to beleive this is your very first build… it seems more like your 49308182th lol. I can see lots of potential, keep it up!!

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Thank you so much, that is so nice.

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It looks very good! There are a lot of unique details on the cottage but, the lawn seems a little dull. I suggest adding some more plants like flowers because I feel like flowers can really fit in with the design of the cottage.

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Wanna trade skills? I’ll give you my scripting skills for this talent! I don’t even know where to start I have never seen any build this beautiful!

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Pretty great!

I suggest now adding landscape and shrubbery.

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Are you sure this is your first build? Because it’s HUMONGOUS for a new builder good job :clap:

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Wow. Thats just amazing especially for a first time builder! Keep it up!

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I’m having a very hard time believing that this is your first build, like really really hard. but if you really did happen to make this as your first build, then good job

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but dont go around say all your builds are your first build just to get clout

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Oh, wow!

That’s amazing, the lighting could be improved though!

Over all, for your first build, 10/10.

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Wow, better than any of my first builds!

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this is your first build? Wow :+1:

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Beautiful! This is incredibly impressive for your first build. I would suggest adding some white trim at the base of the building (where the brick meets the terrain). You could also add some stones leading up the corners of the building like this:

(maybe use a different color to match the rest of the house)
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Amazing job!!!

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This is really good for your first build, I’ve been on Roblox for 4 years and I haven’t even built anything remotely close to this. I love the attention to detail, great work. Keep it up :+1:

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Wow… I’m speechless the sun I mean like I Love the build great work but some feedback hmm maybe you shrink the flower pot its too big for me

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That’s an amazing build, my first build looked far worse than that. I’m amazed at how much you already know. I can’t suggest much, but maybe you should insert custom textures instead of using the normal Roblox textures. In addition I would suggest adding some flowers and bushes to liven up the landscape.

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HOLY CRAP! This is amazing! I see a lot of potential from this!

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This is really good and keep up the good work.

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Omgg this is so nice! there is a lot of details and honestly it kind of looks like it in real life. It is very realistic and gives me some cottage cores vibesss