Feedback on my first digital artwork design

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#1

I’m currently looking forward to consider doing artwork design at my free time, and I decided to share my first freestyle, and cartoony, drawing - listening to your feedback on what needs to improve and how it looks from your perspective in general (I’m always looking up for improvement, so don’t think that you’re being harsh)!

I started off by drawing a character by freestyle and trying to implement a cartoony vibe to it, but hearing your thoughts will improve my accuracy overtime. If you have any feedback on my artwork, feel free to comment down below, I appreciate the criticism and positives.

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#2

The stuff is sort of overlapping and not in perfect shape, but that’s not necessarily bad. It gives it a sort of cartoony feel! I like it.

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#3

It looks great for a start. I do think that there can be some improvement, such as making minor changes to the form and shape of the cartoon character. I do love the style though.

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#4

Howdy! For a beginner, that is great. Despite the fact that I profoundly suggest making the lines smoother and less messy. Smooth lines certainly help ensure art pieces are clean and pleasant to look at. Anyway, I’m eager to see you form into an astounding artist. Best of luck!

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#5

Not bad for a first artwork design! Here’s some feedback :slight_smile:

  • The pink background of the mouth, I suggest remodeling it or simply removing it.

  • The hands, there aren’t any, try to make them a little visible

  • The character is kind of not standing straight, try changing that if you can.

That’s all I can say, can’t wait to see your next one!

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