Feedback on my first ever project - Cargo plane robbery interior

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Hi everyone this is a cargo plane robbery interior that i made for my first ever project so I am looking for some feedback on my model :grimacing:. Its not fully completed yet.RobloxScreenShot20200519_175131420|690x388

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#2

I LOVE THIS! Its soooo good. I cant even make that lol. i recommend adding more realistic features to set the vibe

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#3

Thanks and what kind of features you recommend?

#4

Hm like more buttons and maybe even make glitching lights. Search up Inside of cargo planes so that whay you know what i mean :slight_smile: You should even add a code in the plane. The player needs to hack a computer and find the code in order to unlock a vault or something.

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#5

Looks amazing! Iā€™m not sure if thereā€™s any section of it that is intended to be a little bit more ā€œbrokenā€ or worn down, but if there is something along those lines, possibly adding a flickering light to make it feel more ā€œrealā€ could be nice. Then again, I donā€™t know any other context to the build/ if thereā€™s anything not shown in the picture, so disregard this if it doesnā€™t work with the style of your build!

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#6

i hid a lever in the plane that opens the vault

#7

Oh ok
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#8

Flickering lights added! Thanks you for the idea! :slightly_smiling_face:
hereā€™s how it looks:

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#9

About the hacking part, maybe players need to steal a USB Drive from one of the guards, if there are any rofl, then they would use it to execute a program that connects to the vault.

Yes. Itā€™s a Bluetooth vault.

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#10

Looks like the cargo from jailbreakā€¦But very cool!

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#11

Itā€™s different but I got inspired from it.

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#12

Wow! Thatā€™s amazing. I would recommend adding some detail on walls to make a little contrast, because rn I canā€™t really get the difference between walls and floor

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#13

This is so good! The flashing lights are great! Maybe you can even add some suspenseful music to give the players a sense of urgency.

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#14

I am trying to find one but canā€™t find the perfect one.

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#15

this looks very cool, love it, the only thing is that the chairs look a bit odd

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#16

What can I do to make it better?

#17

idk, its just my opinion back of chair look a bit too tall

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#18

Looking amazing. Especially because this is your first project. Good job! My only suggestion is to detail the interiour/hull of the plane a little bit more.

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#19

Like what can I add? (30 characters)

#20

Wow! This is really cool! Good job on making it!

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