Feedback on my First Ever Real Game

Hi! So I’m a pretty new developer that just got started scripting a few weeks ago, and I decided a few weeks back that I should try my hand at a game. Now, this isn’t the best game, like Adopt Me tiered or JailBreak, but it is my first game and I have to start somewhere. Yes, there are a bunch of free models in this game and the map design isn’t that pretty, but prior to the making of this, I had absolutely zero scripting knowledge. Yet, I learned a lot from the models and scripts like how to make game passes, how to make dev products, etc. Anyway, I’m planning on releasing it on Friday with a budget of around 1k-2k Robux to just get it out there, nothing special, and would like some feedback on it.

What are some things that I could’ve done better/improved on? Thanks in advance.

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I’m gonna be honest, I didn’t really enjoy the game, however…
The map is alright, the free models are obvious, but the map is alright.
I honestly found the game annoying, because the sound effects were loud and annoying, and the map was littered with pets from the DevForum.
However, I would change a couple things, but I found the game unplayable because it was annoying to play, and gross. If you are looking for a younger audience, I suggest not coming to the DevForum.
My final rating for this game, if I did like the game, and I was your target audience, a 7.5/10.
If I wasn’t, probably a 4.5/10.

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I agree with @BenzGamingz, but I would say change the theme like instead of poop, burgers, or dinosaur legends, something that isn’t poop. Don’t waste 1-2k when I’m gonna be honest here I doubt you will make even a fraction of that back. Maybe 100 max, just change the theme honestly to something more child-like/friendly.