Hey!
I have recently developed my first ever spawn area, I was wondering if you people could give me feedback on maybe how to improve and rate it? (Keep in mind that I did use some free models and so therefore I won’t be publishing this anywhere.
This is the game link:
Thank you!
Don’t know what to say. There isnt much feedback to give you because there isn’t really anything in the game itself. The lighting is very poor, so i cannot see the model. I would rate it a 1 out of 5. Would recommend using photo references whenever trying to build and using dummy to scale builds. Also onto lighting, even small uses of ambient, brightness, colour correction and fog could hopefully improve the type of horror theme i feel like you’re going for. Please don’t need this discourage you from building, it’s not something you can be automatically great over on night and will take time to craft skills and styles.
It’s hard to judge it because you literally cannot see anything besides 2 meters from where you spawn. You can improve it by trying to light it up and making/using your own models. Lots of references and tutorials out there to watch. I think you’re going for a dark/horror type of spawn, so sound effects and manipulating the ambient/brightness and other things mentioned above would help. It’s a dungeon too, so maybe add jail cells, skeletons, chains and so on. Good luck.
Hey!
Thank you so much for the feedback, hopefully on my next build I will take these tips to my advantage to maybe create a better build.
I am not getting discouraged so don’t worry 
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Thank you!
Hey!
Thank you for the tips, hopefully I will be able to use these tips to my advantage. As I said, this won’t be published so it is kind of like a practice build to get tips from fellow Developers.
Thank you!
I am kinda confused. I don’t get the spawn meaning, why is there a dead rat with awful quality near it?
Also the lighting is very bad and I cannot see anything near the spawn if not a platform where I spawn on, the floor and the rat. 1/10
Try a better lighting and combine it with some dark fog to get a better result, also remove that rat.
You should practice and I am sure you will get better.
Good luck and keep building!
Would be very helpful if you could provide screenshots! Thanks!
Feels like there should be some incredibly deep meaning behind this. (Or this is like, an ARG or something)
I would also like to note that the game teleports you to a game that isn’t created by the same user.
Pretty sure this game has a virus.
When I join, it automatically sends me to a game called 1. Usually, the virus is in a script just called Script. So, I would look in everything script in the game to find the virus and remove it.
Also, may you provide screenshots of the dungeon?
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Guys this game is not mine!
I don’t why this game teleports me to another game, it has NOTHING to do with this. I am guessing that someone hacked my game or something, any ideas?
It starts off normal but then it automatically teleports me to another game…
If I don’t get any then I will try posting this problem on the DevForum.
EDIT: Sorry, I didn’t know about this, after I started getting replies about dead rats and viruses I wondered what was going on and then I saw.
Is there free models? That’s probs ally what’s causing this.
Yeah there is, but I have checked all of them and there is no TeleportService function in any of the scripts they contain.
Have you tried the anti virus plugin?
And uh, I’d keep looking. Every script.
Yes, on my newest post I got a reply for the plugin and I used it. It removed 163 viruses but it still sends me to that creepy game.
Well, keep looking. Usually the virus is just in models, and in Scripts, other than that, I don’t know anything else to help you.
The virus will probs be in the weirdest place.
I searched up ‘Script’ in the Explorer and checked through all 27 of them, nothing. There is just duplicates of the same script and that’s about it.
Thanks for trying to help though, I appreciate it.
Please learn how to make models if you didn’t or get a exploit detector. Cause I get a tp to a game which is of exploiters.