Feedback on my first full-length song

Hello! This is the first time I’ve been able to create a full-length song (almost 2 min). I would like feedback on what I have created.

Please share feedback.
Thanks.

Info:
BPM - 73 and 70
Key - Bb Major
Program - Musescore 4
Instruments - Acoustic Bass, Trumpet, Piano, Drumset
Time taken: 4 Hours

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Hello, really good music composition, the music is not exaggerated, quiet, calm and pleasant to the ear, it would suit many lobbies. Really good job. Regards

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I think this music lacks a bit of accenting on the piano at certain points, but that might as well be my personal taste and approach on music. It is compositionally good, just needs to narrow down the technique there for the extra. For writing this up for 4 hours, it’s pretty good.

Oh yeah, you could also accent the hi-hats a little more so they don’t sound flat(constant velocity as I would call it). It will help the groove.

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