Feedback on my first game (Apple Store Tycoon)

I just made my first ever game and would love some feedback!
(I used this kit)
https://www.roblox.com/library/316073214/Zeds-Tycoon-Kit-FIXED?Category=Models&SortType=Bestselling&SortAggregation=AllTime&SearchKeyword=+tycoon+kit&CreatorId=0&Page=1&Position=37&SearchId=b271fb92-af32-40f6-84a9-c9dee388450a

https://www.roblox.com/games/5759542134/Apple-Store-Tycoon?refPageId=72f43f1b-fd11-4bba-bbb5-67510f9fc405

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why so many gamepass buttons, tycoons with a massive amount of robux based droppers/upgraders are never my favorite.

Some parts are misaligned.


You used a Minecraft glass texture.


The lights seem too small


The bar is too tall.


I can go into this hole here.


The kill counter doesn’t work.


You can abuse the codes.


DONE

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I would reccomend changing the name so that Apple does not get angry. (Pear store tycoon)

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I think it looks cool! I would agree with bestie that you should probably change the name for copyright reasons.