I’m currently creating my first Roblox game that I named “Cafe Simulator”!
I would like to know what you are thinking about what has been created at the moment.
Hey there! I have a few suggestions that I think should help you out. Sorry if I am a little bit specific, I don’t have any bad intentions.
For one, the spawn location decal should be removed as it would make the spawn completely transparent.
Another thing is I found a few minor spelling errors. They aren’t that serious. Comming is an obsolete spelling of Coming according to multiple sources, and Coming is the correct way of spelling it.
Development is also spelt wrong in this picture. Overall, this is a really cool game and I cannot wait to see how far this game grows. I hope this helps with your development
Hello! Thanks you for the feedback! About the word bad writed, i’m sorry. I’m French and sometime I do some error while writing Thanks you for correcting them!
Also, I fixed the spawn location.
Thank you for the feedback!
I think this is really good for a first game, and that it has potential. There are a few issues, but it seems like you are working on them. Focus on polishing and updating it and I am sure it’s gonna be an amazing game!
The Logo itself looks like something made in MS Paint by a 5 Year old. It would generally look better if you just typed it out in the Roblox UI Editor. Also when I gave the customer there order I did not receive any money. The builds do not fit this game at all they feel like builds that would have been used 6 - 7 years ago. Also no offense for the things I said I was just giving my opinion.