Feedback on My First Game! (WRITE RIGHT)

Write Right

I have made my first Roblox Game! A comedy gui multiplayer game: Write Right

2+ players. Create stories with your friends! Each of you will start a story with just a few words, then it will pass to the next person to continue the story, but they are just able to see the previous line of it! Then you’ll read all the stories, there will be some really funny ones!

Write Right

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Definitely a fun game! Can’t wait to play this with friends.

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Hey There,

Congratulations on making your first game, very cool and exclusive amount of detail you have put to give the players a spice touch when first jumping in. The Lobby seems a bit blurry though, if you want to make it blurry try adding a GUI - Play Now and then making it blurry in the back. :slight_smile:

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The 2d gui doesnt fit well with the background for me. maybe try making the gui on top of the table