Feedback on my first game

Hello developers, This is my first topic on DevForum. Recently, I published my game and I would like to ask you for feedback on it. So I want you to focus on these questions:

  1. Is the game complex or hard to understand?
  2. Is the tutorial easy to understand?
  3. Is there anything that makes you want to stay or leave? (What and Why)
  4. Will you come back? and Why?

I’m happy to listen to you, feel free to give me feedback. You also can give me any suggestions.

Here’s the link: Ultimate Slap Fighting

Due to it’s a 1v1 game, it would be good if you bring your friends to play with or you can play with me if you see me.

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nice game do you wanna check out my game i working on ?

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I was only able to check the tutorial, because nobody joined. These are things I’d like to point out about it:

  1. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect (use AI to fix it for you).
  2. It’s pretty long. Try to limit your words usage. What I mean is, instead of saying for example “you may wonder what that button is used for? That button activates the slap effect.”, just say “This button activates the slap effect”.

Overall it’s understandable so you did that well!

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yes i have grammar problems too but it’s easy to understand me right ? again the game is cool but you need players for it

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Well I mean, grammatically incorrect sentences (especially in a tutorial) can lead to confusion, misinterpretation of instructions, and frustration for players, potentially reducing their engagement and enjoyment of the game. Maybe it’s just me though…

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Thank you both of you.

I love to hear that. And I’d already checked your game, it’s good. Keep going, I’m waiting to see your game come out.

I’m sorry that I wasn’t in game at that moment. Thank you again for the feedback, I’ll fix that.

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