Hello developers, This is my first topic on DevForum. Recently, I published my game and I would like to ask you for feedback on it. So I want you to focus on these questions:
Is the game complex or hard to understand?
Is the tutorial easy to understand?
Is there anything that makes you want to stay or leave? (What and Why)
Will you come back? and Why?
I’m happy to listen to you, feel free to give me feedback. You also can give me any suggestions.
I was only able to check the tutorial, because nobody joined. These are things I’d like to point out about it:
Some sentences are grammatically incorrect (use AI to fix it for you).
It’s pretty long. Try to limit your words usage. What I mean is, instead of saying for example “you may wonder what that button is used for? That button activates the slap effect.”, just say “This button activates the slap effect”.
Well I mean, grammatically incorrect sentences (especially in a tutorial) can lead to confusion, misinterpretation of instructions, and frustration for players, potentially reducing their engagement and enjoyment of the game. Maybe it’s just me though…