Hello! I would like some feedback on this GFX I made on Blender to improve in the future.
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It looks great! I like the smoke effects.
I like it, but you could improve the smoke effect.
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Spectacular for your first shot, I would recommend making the smoke look like it isn’t just appearing. If you could improve it, it would make it that much better. Good Luck!
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It looks great! One thing I’d change is the material of the character. Personally, I prefer characters that shine and reflect, as if they were made of glass. To me, the material of the character in your GFX seems a bit too plastic-y if you know what I mean. This is just my own opinion though.
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As a GFX artist if I saw this myself I would first lessen the shine on the character because it is a little bit too much. Secondly I would probably get rid of that smoke and add a photoshopped smoke myself as this smoke adds too much noise that needs some denoising in the picture. Lastly, if you wanna make it look even cooler, you can add some green lighting and effects to really fit that greeen theme and change the background
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I think it soo gloosy+ graphic and picture size. Smoke effects is so transperent, i think it will be mostly pretty if you make smoke effect closing character legs. About graphic, light is so bright+ and i say it again soo gloosy. make gloosy effect a little smaller. I think its good like first GFX, but i just saying tips for you <3
Goodluck!
Yes i too think it, green light+ lessen shine is good idea.
About smoke: yes I
didn’t notice at first that it was making noise, but your answer make me more watchful.
It looks GOOD. What I would have done is turn down the opacity of smoke and add
motion or zoom blur to it. Good luck on your gfx journey, keep practicing your skills and know one thing: Practice makes man perfect
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It looks good. Make the smoke effects a bit blurrier though.